Comments On Rough Cut

I believe that camera angles and work have been carried out very well in our rough cut. We have used a majoirty of different shots and angles although i believe at some stages in the piece we may have used a few to many. With regards to the begging of the rough cut, from the bedroom scene of playing the guitar to ally walking down the road after locking the door. This part of the cut is out of time, and the camera is also very unsteady, this was because the clip had not been stabilised, a tool which is available on the editing software that we are using called iMovie. Also there are alot of gaps that i believe should be filmed, for example were the main character ally comes out of the door